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The Prince raised his broad right hand, and brought it crashing down on Cinderella’s right cheek. She did not make a sound. Whack! Smack! Whack! The Prince forcefully demonstrated his displeasure. Smack! Smack! Whack! Her breath grew shorter as the heat built. Right, left , right, left, smack, crack, whack, smack! Cinderella whimpered. Whack! Whack! Whack! She shed her first unaccompanied tears since coming to the castle. The Prince, unimpressed, continued to give her fifty more before lifting her off his lap, setting her down on the bed, and quietly leaving her chambers. The click of the door latch stung far more than her throbbing bottom.
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http://saturdayspankings.blogspot.com/
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An Open Apology for “Capcha”:
I love to hear your comments. Every author loves to hear positive comments. Every author who is serious about improving her or his work should at least give thoughtful consideration to constructive negative comments, the key word being “constructive”. Sorry about the “Capcha”, but I had a run in with some nasty trolls a while back. I’d no sooner block a name, than the same individual (same misspelled words and grammatical errors) would post under another name. I had to add moderation to the comments. I didn't realize that moderating at my end added a “capcha" at yours. Once again, sorry for any inconvenience. CK
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Check out The Mercies of Cinderella by Ken Charles
This is no Disney princess!
http://www.amazon.com/dp/B01B1W4YWK
Payback is a bitch, and so at times is Cinderella. Cinderella is about to marry Prince Charming. Her evil Step Mother and Stepsisters have been convicted of high treason for their conspiracy to prevent the Prince from finding his true love, and are awaiting sentencing. Before the Prince passes sentence, Cinderella asks to take them into her custody for a year to determine whether she may speak on their behalves. The Prince grants her request, and remands the Step relations to one year under the tender mercies of Cinderella.
During this year, while Cinderella basks in the boundless love of the Prince and the joy of her first pregnancy, she applies the hard lessons she learned growing up to her Stepsisters, expressing her concern for their moral edification and well being with various paddles, straps, and even the scopula of a giant trap-door spider. Step Mother, who taught her that nothing in life is free, has to pay for her keep with sexual favors for all who provide her with any goods or services.
This sounds like a delightful spin on the classic Cinderella story. Very intriguing.
ReplyDeleteIntriguing - and a lot more exciting than the original tale of Cinderella :)
ReplyDeletethis is very intriguing and will definitely pull more than just me..
ReplyDeleteA very original and intriguing premise. Why didn't I think of this!! Nice job.
ReplyDeleteI love the detail of the door click- hot!
ReplyDeleteI'm giggling on your twist of this tale. Very interesting!
ReplyDeleteI hate when they leave without a word. That is worse than a spanking. Great snippet!!
ReplyDeleteI get more and more tempted by this book all the time! Thanks for the (owie) snippet!
ReplyDeleteI'm with Mary. What, no cuddles, no reassurance. He must be super pissed. What on earth did Cindy do to be punished like that? I tell you, sometimes there's just no pleasing the prince. Another great snippet, though, Ken. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet. I love the concept and I can’t wait to read what else you have written with your version of this tale :)
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